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Interplanetary Dilemma
Contributed by
xHeathenx
on
Friday, 6th February 2015 @ 05:37:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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I awake upon a field of dirt and rock
Not knowing how I got here
Starships fight in the skies
Making them all but clear
Man-made factories spout out
From the brown dusty soil
I quickly seek safe refuge
A truly arduous toil
Man has shown his many strengths
A new chapter in his tome
By terraforming the rock
Closest to his home
I need to find a way to escape
Leave this hellish front
For the growing insurrection
Will purge the present brunt
I stumble upon a desolate ship
And am left to make
A decision between the sides
Should one of them I take?
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Re: Interplanetary Dilemma
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 6th February 2015 @ 09:46:18 AM AEST
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| Love your thoughts in this piece. The rhythm and rhyme such an effortless flow. |
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Re: Interplanetary Dilemma
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by alicewhite on
Friday, 6th February 2015 @ 06:32:48 PM AEST
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wow, just like these lyrics, you hit a chord
Gary Numan
Were in the building where they make us grow
And I'm frightened by the liquid engineers
Like you
My mallory heart is sure to fail
I could crawl around the floor just like I'm real
Like you
The sound of metal I want to be you
I could learn to be a man
Like you
Plug me in and turn me on
Oh everything is moving
I need my treatment its tomorrow they send me
Singing I am an american
Do you?
Picture this if they could make the change
Id love to pull the wires from the wall
Did you?
And who are you and how can I try?
Here inside I like metal
In you
All I know is no one dies
I'm still confusing love with need
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Re: Interplanetary Dilemma
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by Qas on
Thursday, 12th February 2015 @ 04:28:17 PM AEST
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I absolutely loved that!
I'm jealous of the dream and inspired by the theme ;p
Really, really good!!
I will definitely come back later and see what else you've created. :) |
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