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in the small hours
Contributed by
ming
on
Monday, 2nd February 2015 @ 09:45:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Of dawn
I cut off
my fingers
my ink
was old
I cut out
my heart
my world
seemed small
I cut up
my thoughts
my brain
is abstract
then in darkness
I paste
the uniVERSE.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2015-02-02 21:45:36]
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Re: in the small hours
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd February 2015 @ 11:03:37 PM AEST
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| Totally cool!!! |
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Re: in the small hours
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2015 @ 08:53:23 AM AEST
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Interesting. I dig this poem! Worthy of the 'abstract' category, which is commendable in its own right. Nice job.
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Re: in the small hours
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2015 @ 12:02:34 PM AEST
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| This sort of blew me away. So crisply written. I quite enjoyed it. |
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