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The Circular Boot
Contributed by
Qas
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Monday, 2nd February 2015 @ 05:59:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Truth be told,
Dying old,
I lacked the soul
To be bold,
For when I died,
It was inside,
Yet aimlessly,
On I tried...
I tried, I tried,
And then I cried,
For inside I found I`d died.
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Qas
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2015-02-02 17:59:47]
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Re: The Circular Boot
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by Invierno on
Monday, 2nd February 2015 @ 06:54:08 PM AEST
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I feel you...I feel this poem. You are coming to wisdom. Only by acknowledging sorrow and loss can you come to appreciate joy and find yourself.
Please keep writing . You will find poetry to be very cathartic to the soul.
When you write, forget everything except your mind, you hand and your pen. The stream flowing most smooth is one without rocks.
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Re: The Circular Boot
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 2nd February 2015 @ 08:36:36 PM AEST
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| Wow. So few words that say so much. I can totally relate. |
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Re: The Circular Boot
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2015 @ 09:06:04 AM AEST
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This write becomes stronger with each re-read. The title, everything, works really well. Keep writing it out.
Wonderful, succinct expression.
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