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Miles of Love
Contributed by
Jennifer_Craig
on
Monday, 2nd February 2015 @ 10:37:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You’re with me when I wake up
And when I brush out my hair
I can feel your presence with me
Even when you aren’t there
When I head to work I’m stressed out
But you’re there to calm my nerves
In the crazy days I have there
You’re the peace that I deserve
Just a simple call reminds me
As your voice brings me to melt
How I always feel my safest
Playing out the card we’re dealt
Though your body isn’t present
I can feel you with my heart
Lying down in bed I smile…
You’ve been with me from the start!
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Written based on her experience on long distance relationship.
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Jennifer_Craig
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2015-02-02 10:37:16]
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Re: Miles of Love
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by Invierno on
Monday, 2nd February 2015 @ 04:29:16 PM AEST
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"In the crazy days I have there
You’re the peace that I deserve"
Perfection. Well done.
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Re: Miles of Love
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 6th February 2015 @ 04:33:59 PM AEST
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Soothing as a gentle stream trickling down the mountainside.
One of those poems that make you let out a contented sigh at the end.
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