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we all float down here
Contributed by
alicewhite
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Friday, 30th January 2015 @ 08:53:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
MothersDayPoems
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tip toed across the void
paranormal paranoid
Sigmund Freud
everyday is like groundhog day
what ? repeat that again is what you say,
and so on and on it goes
you and me counting stars
and stares of strangers and everyone we all know
but who knows which is witch and who is who
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2015-01-30 20:53:34]
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Re: we all float down here
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Saturday, 31st January 2015 @ 10:50:38 AM AEST
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You are scientifically packing a lot in here. Wow, you are tall in talent. I enjoyed this.
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Re: we all float down here
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 6th February 2015 @ 04:41:46 PM AEST
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Not tongue tied or tongue tired, that is plain to see.
You weave words and leave thoughts to those that read.
I like your style, this made me smile
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Re: we all float down here
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by Peacdrug on
Monday, 16th February 2015 @ 09:24:31 PM AEST
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| I can't stop reading the first stanza! Loving this |
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