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Why
Contributed by
CherylC
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Thursday, 29th January 2015 @ 10:18:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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There in the sky you see the clouds turn dark,
The colors look eery as the storm comes closer to home
And suddenly you hear "BOOM!!"
Then the lightening strikes somewhere close and you jump....
Here I stand while the rain is dripping from my hair to my nose,
I am not sure if what is rolling down my cheek is a tear...
Our baby was taken from us before we knew,
I can't bear this burden alone and yet....
There comes stones of rain pouring down from Heaven
Feels like my sky is falling down all around me....
Oh, the despair I harbour inside of my soul
This pain is like the crackling of thunder in this storm
The sky looks wicked, like confused by all the colors,
And the rain keeps pouring down upon me harshly....
Please call for help for I believe the lightening struck,
Well, you know, lightening has a lot of currency and....Well, the storm is over and here I am,
The sky is still falling down around me and yet...
This is our loss, our child is gone, and the storm?
The storm continues.
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2015-01-29 22:18:15]
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Re: Why
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th January 2015 @ 10:28:44 PM AEST
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| Very sad but nicely written. Lots of emotion there and lots of imagery. |
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Re: Why
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by Noonetwothree on
Wednesday, 4th March 2015 @ 04:05:48 AM AEST
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| The parallel between the storm and your pain really hit me. Thank you for sharing. |
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