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Day And Night
Contributed by
The_Phantom
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Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 11:35:00 AM in AEST
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I look past the gray, and I see you,
Teardrops fall like rain, glisen like morning dew,
The night comes day runs away, that's when the stars come out to play,
I pick the closest one to me, and I say a phase,
Peace be my journey, God lead my way,
By the light of the moon, I will ride to your room,
In your dreams I came, in the flesh I'm ashamed,
Your beauity like the rose, enlightens my soul,
Look into my eyes, can't you see it's the mask I hide behind,
I'm scared to show my face, it's grim and out of place,
A touch as soft as velvet, if I close my eyes I can feel it,
From the murkey dephts of hell, my heart will yell,
Dream on my love, I will be there by the raising of the sun,
As I approach your bed, the sun barely breaks, I sceam as you awake,
I'm drawn back from which I came, all the while calling your name,
Though I have nothing, I leave you with something,
A single yellow rose upon a mask, with I love you written on the glass,
Back to the fires of hell I go, standing in flames but feeling so cold,
The moon sleeps, as the sun takes flight,
You are day, I am night.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
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Re: Day And Night
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 01:57:32 PM AEST
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| Wow this is so beautiful,I'm sure she will love it as well! Great write! Christina |
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Re: Day And Night
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by PhantomsLDY on
Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 07:20:11 PM AEST
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| This is so beautiful Babe. Thank you! I love you too!! |
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Re: Day And Night
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 07:22:47 PM AEST
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Awww Matt...this is awesome!!
Keep that sword going!!!
Jenni |
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Re: Day And Night
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 07:36:56 PM AEST
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excellent beautiful write...well said statement of your love
Shari |
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Re: Day And Night
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 01:33:52 AM AEST
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| This is my favourite of all your poems ... so tragically romantic - so well written... heartbreaking, but so full of love ... Jan |
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Re: Day And Night
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 02:44:49 AM AEST
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| Wow! it is fantastic..very touching..very intense...very beautiful.. venkat |
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Re: Day And Night
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by The_Phantom on
Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 06:23:10 PM AEST
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Thank you all, you have truly made my night, Thank you once agan. Much love
The Phantom |
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Re: Day And Night
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 04:29:45 PM AEST
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| i believe these teardrops that fall like rain from your eyes are tears of love and happiness for your beautiful wife whom you love so very much, and the dream is one where you pinch yourself and find you are awake:) ~hugs n' love to you both, nessa |
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Re: Day And Night
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by BlackFire9786 on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 05:12:06 PM AEST
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Wow this is a beautiful poem, so sad but full of love, my heart goes out to you. I love all of your work, and this is among my favorites. Keep writing! Luv ya lotz-Lisa
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Re: Day And Night
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by The_Phantom on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 06:46:27 PM AEST
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Thank you all for your wonderful comments, they are the things that keep this man writing. Thank you.
The Phantom |
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Re: Day And Night
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by EyesRustedShut on
Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 11:51:30 PM AEST
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| Cool poem... If you like good music and you have some extra time check out the music of Monday In London at www.mondayinlondon.com |
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