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When
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
on
Friday, 23rd January 2015 @ 08:02:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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When the moon is high
and the lands are shaded
When the dreams are awakened
and the soul left abraded
When the shadows have fallen
and the night comes to be
When the world grows quiet
and the eyes are open to see
When the winds howl
and whip things about
When the trees look like phantoms
and the branches all reach out
When the night grows longer
and the day no longer shows
When the wind does whisper
and the longings do grow
When the voices grow weary
and the heart beats so loud
When the darkness envelopes me
I shall walk tall and proud.
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2015-01-23 08:02:53]
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Re: When
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th January 2015 @ 02:52:02 AM AEST
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I cannot believe I am the first to say this is grand.
You know, I thought from the first line it was done before, then, well, you really utilized magical imagery
and proposed something with imagery that somehow is still sadly seldom seen.
This is really well done!
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Re: When
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by JamesStockdale on
Sunday, 25th January 2015 @ 08:55:12 AM AEST
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I think its grand
Really dig it! |
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Re: When
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by kmec1990 on
Sunday, 25th January 2015 @ 05:42:22 PM AEST
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Excellent write, I love this
K |
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Re: When
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by kmec1990 on
Sunday, 25th January 2015 @ 05:42:26 PM AEST
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Excellent write, I love this
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Re: When
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by shelby on
Thursday, 29th January 2015 @ 09:18:07 PM AEST
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I was sitting there with you,beautiful in its touching shades of blue and the end so profound.
Hugs
Michelle |
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