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Gone
Contributed by
banjosandwitch
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Monday, 19th January 2015 @ 05:34:23 PM in AEST
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Gone
Travelling into the city
Finding change all around
The places I used to love
The buildings I worked in
Gone are the past playgrounds of my youth
Replaced by car parks and flats
Crushed are the dilapidated
Swapped for shiny and new
Only in photographs and memories
The places of my life lie
Stolen from this earth
Gone forever, gone for good
Soon this new will be old
And the cycle will continue
Out with the old and regenerate
All that was ends up gone
by banjosandwitch 12/01/15
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Re: Gone
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by Qas on
Monday, 19th January 2015 @ 06:33:16 PM AEST
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Nice one, can definitely identify with that.
Makes me think of many other affects of time and 'progress' such as gentrification and tax funded 'enrichment'. Bit also the end gives some ambivalence on hope and futility :p |
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Re: Gone
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by kmec1990 on
Monday, 19th January 2015 @ 07:39:08 PM AEST
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Sad but true, we have become a throw away society, nice write!
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Re: Gone
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by Aaishaessie on
Tuesday, 20th January 2015 @ 01:47:28 AM AEST
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| yeah all the sweet memories only lie in photographs now...its a sad reality...great poem |
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Re: Gone
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by Waynster on
Tuesday, 20th January 2015 @ 03:26:22 PM AEST
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Nice write, that inspires me to write a poem as well! So true what you say though.
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