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Written on a night bus home with a friend (a 'bit' tongue and cheek)
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Qas
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Thursday, 15th January 2015 @ 07:16:19 PM in AEST
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Don't pity where I lie,
I put myself here,
I deserve to die,
No more, no more.
I lived a lie,
And live one still,
To know the truth,
Makes me ill.
Sickened by a fate,
That forsakes me,
I'll never find a mate,
Forever alone...
Death I beckon thee,
End my suffering,
Emancipate me,
End it now...
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Qas
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2015-01-15 19:16:19]
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Re: Written on a night bus home with a friend (a 'bit' tongue and cheek)
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by JamesStockdale on
Friday, 16th January 2015 @ 07:38:52 AM AEST
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Well at least your positive.
Jokes aside it was a ride!
Great! |
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Re: Written on a night bus home with a friend (a 'bit' tongue and cheek)
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by Waynster on
Tuesday, 20th January 2015 @ 03:21:19 PM AEST
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Hello,
Not sure what to think of this poem you wrote! Try to read some of my earlier poems I have written and see how they make you feel! Everyone has bad times and even take a wrong path in life, but that is all it is, a wrong path! Path's can be changed as there is always other directions in which you can go. Life is what we make it and how we experience it. One day in our futures, we can look back and see the path's we have traveled and understand why we went the way we did! You too shall find your way and find your happiness! If you ever want to chat, just look me up.
Wayne |
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