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Winter Risks
Contributed by
xHeathenx
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Thursday, 15th January 2015 @ 06:03:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Sometimes I see myself as intelligent
And sometimes I seem rather dumb
I complain of the bitter cold
And yet in it I stand, shaking and numb
I see a patch of ice that beckons me
To try and walk upon it
Even though I know the risks
Of the chance to slip and fall
And so I take that risk and step forth
That balanced step, feels rather nice
And so that's how you fit, in my winter world
My very own tempting patch of ice
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Re: Winter Risks
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th January 2015 @ 11:35:48 PM AEST
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This poem gave me a smile. Thank you. Oh, and I'd slip and fall...no doubt. Clumsy is my middle name.
Thanks for an enjoyable read.
Tim |
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Re: Winter Risks
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by JamesStockdale on
Friday, 16th January 2015 @ 07:40:59 AM AEST
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I laughed and fell
Gave out a yell
Should have read your poem first.
Great!!!!!!!!! |
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