|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
You so and so
Contributed by
softerware
on
Wednesday, 14th January 2015 @ 09:25:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
HumorPoetry
|
Black and purple, green and pink,
Draped in leather, silk, or mink!
Soft, unyielding, thick or thin;
Depends upon the mood she’s in!
Firm to fluid, dark to light;
Up and down all through the night!
Straight or crooked, zig then zag;
Stroke it, guide it, coax and drag!
Feed me more the monster wheedles!
Lest you suffer pins and needles!
Crossed-eyed now I court disaster!
I the servant, you the master!
Weav’in, bobb’in torn and tatern;
Bedeviled by the wayward pattern;
Foot up, foot down, Pressed between;
The nameless layers so it seams!
Judge me worthy, thou unbiased;
Maker of all things most highest!
I obey your every rule!
You the skillful; I the fool!
I sing the words, you merely hum;
Pray hurry for the end to come!
All at once the singer coughs!
I seize my chance and bite it off!
Cut the power; kill the lights
We have sewn enough tonight.
Copyright ©
softerware
... [
2015-01-14 21:25:55]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: You so and so
(User Rating: 1 )
by sanders on
Wednesday, 14th January 2015 @ 10:15:41 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
nicely woven , captivating
seducing , brilliant poetry...
hats off friend :) |
|
|
Re: You so and so
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th January 2015 @ 11:41:19 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Oooooooh! You mean you sew and sew!!! lol. D'oh! Great one!!! |
|
|
Re: You so and so
(User Rating: 1 )
by xHeathenx on
Thursday, 15th January 2015 @ 11:15:44 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Ah that's clever! I didn't fully understand until I saw Timotheous's comment, and then it made sense. I was thinking along the lines of it starting with a man in a more submissive role in a relationship. Good poem, love the rhythm, rhymes, words used, and emotion therein. |
|
|
Re: You so and so
(User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on
Thursday, 15th January 2015 @ 07:07:58 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Applause!!!!!!1 read it as fast as (I think, like a good canter) the style begged and it was flawless- the pattern was as smooth as a champion horse running laps at dawn in the mist, with silence all around but hooves on dirt.
Spicy stuff! A really nice fun read..thanks for sharing this.
Invierno |
|
|
Re: You so and so
(User Rating: 1 )
by elle on
Thursday, 15th January 2015 @ 10:22:00 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Smiles & Hugs. . .
Oh. . .
& a huge bravo! |
|
|
Re: You so and so
(User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 30th January 2015 @ 03:04:44 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
To make people smile and laugh is truly a gift.
You did that here, you really sneaked up on me with this one.
Once again, glad I read :-)
Steve |
|
|
Re: You so and so
(User Rating: 1 )
by Pogivic on
Sunday, 29th March 2015 @ 09:09:23 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Your poems seem to leave me astonished at how they can play in my mind until it all comes together and I think, How beautifully written. I can read it again and get even more meaning from it. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
