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Hold On
Contributed by
Beyfoxman5
on
Monday, 12th January 2015 @ 05:26:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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It has been said that life goes by like running water,
And I have found this much is true
You see people you know one moment
You blink your eyes, it is those people you once knew
The surface flies as fast as lightning
And beneath this surface swim fish
We peak, peer, and gaze frantically
Because there is nothing that we want to miss
So why not find a fish
And grab on to one of his fins?
Picture the best, without seeing clearly the future
All you can do is begin
When life has you neck deep in alligators
Your brain upstairs is mobbed
And you have no idea how to make your life
Hold on, that's your job
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2015-01-12 17:26:58]
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Re: Hold On
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by irisblue on
Monday, 12th January 2015 @ 07:41:40 PM AEST
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| I love this poem! There is so much wisdom in this write. I can relate so much! Never ever give up! And enjoy the moment, I get it and love this. |
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Re: Hold On
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by xHeathenx on
Tuesday, 13th January 2015 @ 04:21:17 PM AEST
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This makes me think of all us, and even in some senses some of us. Passing through at confounding speeds, missing out on all too much, while trying to miss nothing, yet missing everything. The alligators and mobbed brain line I don't really get, unless it's along the lines of it being scary, and our brains being bombarded with "what ifs" and "what will bes".
A good write nonetheless. :) |
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Re: Hold On
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by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 15th January 2015 @ 02:24:36 PM AEST
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Absolutely spot on.
Take time to smell the roses.
To me as I get older time is like a runaway train.
Great read as usual! |
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