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Amazing, Really
Contributed by
Invierno
on
Saturday, 10th January 2015 @ 12:59:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I try and try to tap into me-
there ain't no drill deep enough or hard enough
to pentrate the truth I glimpse, I see.
No bit of diamond carbonite
to scrape away the nights,
the sin and grins and falsity
that defines the essense of myself.
Amazing really, I am the only one
to let loose the inside-
the only one I don't have to hide from,
but I do-
I don't, don't know what else to do,
and never having learned
how to be true and noble to my greatest gift-
me. My soul.
My being...so sad
I never learned,
and fifty-one years in
the scab is just as firm.
Copyright ©
Invierno
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2015-01-10 12:59:17]
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Re: Amazing, Really
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by kmec1990 on
Saturday, 10th January 2015 @ 04:58:51 PM AEST
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Hiding the truth from yourself is humankinds greatest accomplishment, however I might beg to differ about not reaching inside this poem was pretty deep and self reflective. excellent write by the way
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Re: Amazing, Really
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by shelby on
Saturday, 10th January 2015 @ 06:20:12 PM AEST
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Thanks for sharing this deep soulful write.I think we are all in a search.
Hugs
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Re: Amazing, Really
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by JamesStockdale on
Sunday, 30th August 2020 @ 02:15:31 PM AEST
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I liked this one........
Thanks....you are a joy to read. |
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