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Hallowed Spaces
Contributed by
deadreckoning1983
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Friday, 9th January 2015 @ 11:20:25 PM in AEST
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The Moon rises high.
Vindictive,
It casts porcelain shadows,
Like a fan of knives.
Under its waxing and waning
I feel lycanthropic.
Trembling in its magnetic power.
Drawn away from my humanity,
Into a feral landscape,
Untouched, unencumbered by restraint or bias.
Salubrious this place.
Resting without presupposition.
I dreamt of her again,
She still waits for me.
Safe in the hollow of love we carved out.
A carbon copy of our reality.
Copyright ©
deadreckoning1983
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2015-01-09 23:20:25]
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Re: Hallowed Spaces
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by Invierno on
Saturday, 10th January 2015 @ 12:09:32 PM AEST
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Far out and awesome.
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Re: Hallowed Spaces
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by kmec1990 on
Saturday, 10th January 2015 @ 05:01:57 PM AEST
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All I have is wow!
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Re: Hallowed Spaces
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by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 10th January 2015 @ 11:59:20 PM AEST
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| wow is right..... |
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Re: Hallowed Spaces
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th January 2015 @ 04:04:38 AM AEST
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| I loved it!!! |
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Re: Hallowed Spaces
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 11th January 2015 @ 10:21:01 AM AEST
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ARH-WOOOOOOOOOO!
I learned a new word. :)
Well aren't you announcing yourself loud and proud in 2015. What an enticing write! Of course the moon makes your crabbiness ball out.
Thrilling to read, keep it up.
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Re: Hallowed Spaces
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by FireStarter on
Wednesday, 14th January 2015 @ 08:14:24 PM AEST
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| A new word I see ^-^ |
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Re: Hallowed Spaces
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 24th February 2015 @ 01:43:12 PM AEST
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You are a very good poet. This is a stunning piece of writing you have here! And if I have not said it I am impressed.
(I remember you from ten years ago, It is funny how time matures us, I don't mean age, I mean substance).
I don't post as I did back then, but I am still enthralled with being a member of this site. |
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Re: Hallowed Spaces
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 27th March 2015 @ 08:54:10 PM AEST
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absolutely beautifully exquisite!
hugs n' love nessa
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