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Flash
Contributed by
drone
on
Friday, 9th January 2015 @ 01:51:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Hope
is like
a flash
in a pan
looks pretty
feels warm
but not for long
Copyright ©
drone
... [
2015-01-09 13:51:22]
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Re: Flash
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Saturday, 10th January 2015 @ 02:35:21 PM AEST
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Hope-we better act on it if we get the chance.
Great points.
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Re: Flash
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by kmec1990 on
Saturday, 10th January 2015 @ 05:03:55 PM AEST
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Way too true unfortunately and the crap is it springs eternal in an endless cycle until it doesn't and that might be worse. Excellent write, more is less.
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Re: Flash
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th January 2015 @ 12:12:08 AM AEST
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A flash is more like
a fish before it is caught
Hope to me at least
Is something we share
It's looking at things as they appear
Together
I hope.
But I know it's easy to get lost.
Still I like your poem Senior Drone!
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