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Abstract Enigma
Contributed by
JamesStockdale
on
Friday, 9th January 2015 @ 12:18:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Brown leaves of green
Sun capped Cascades
Desert sands of blue
Ocean waves of gold
Summer snow so warm
Dry rain drought
Red moon horizons
Sun blackened skies
Whispering winds of calm
Underground tornadoes
Tropical blizzards
Alaskan palms
Flat majestic mountains
Crevasses so high
Pristine polluted waters
Low elevation skies
Sinking tides
Traces of space
Colorless rainbows
Limited divides
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JamesStockdale
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2015-01-09 12:18:37] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Abstract Enigma
(User Rating: 1 ) by kmec1990 on
Saturday, 10th January 2015 @ 05:05:32 PM AEST (User
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Spectacular, I love this what a play on words. Thanks for sharing
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Re: Abstract Enigma
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Saturday, 10th January 2015 @ 06:22:06 PM AEST (User
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Wow descriptive verse and play on words.
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Re: Abstract Enigma
(User Rating: 1 ) by xHeathenx on
Tuesday, 13th January 2015 @ 07:01:21 PM AEST (User
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I like how despite each and everyone of these being nearly complete contradictions, or at the very least a challenge to what we know and believe, each and almost all of them, depending on the reader, can be quite vivid and well-imagined. I'd say this world sounds insane, but like the chaos realm in Mortal Kombat Deception, it's a fun world to see. :) |
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Re: Abstract Enigma
(User Rating: 1 ) by Beyfoxman5 on
Thursday, 15th January 2015 @ 02:09:23 PM AEST (User
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The title was why I chose to read it. What you wrote trumps everything. Outstanding.
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Re: Abstract Enigma
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lionel on
Friday, 27th February 2015 @ 07:20:20 PM AEST (User
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You are soooo expressive. I think more intelligent than me. |
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Re: Abstract Enigma
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th September 2020 @ 06:07:54 AM AEST (User
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// // I agree with spectacular and throw in an impressive too!!! 👍🏼 |
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