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S...t...e...p
Contributed by
Beyfoxman5
on
Monday, 5th January 2015 @ 05:36:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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P
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You are idle no more
P
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Pick yourself up, off the floor
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Within yourself a core belief
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You will not lie here, in defeat
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In mind and body, a winning tranquility
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Without movement, there is no possibility
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Each pace, equals a seed
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Of the world's largest sequoia tree
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One by one, they will amass
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Core filled passes down victory path
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Re: S...t...e...p
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th January 2015 @ 08:49:52 PM AEST
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| Way too cool, in cleverness and in inspiration. |
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Re: S...t...e...p
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by softerware on
Monday, 5th January 2015 @ 09:46:39 PM AEST
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Nice play on words and the ladder invites us upward! The only way to stay is not to quit!
What fun! Thank you for the positive tone!
softerware |
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Re: S...t...e...p
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th January 2015 @ 04:15:23 AM AEST
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| Inspirational this is. A tiny seed to the top of the sequoia is a long way, but it starts with the seed of that first step. Could be used in a self-help group. Great job, great style. |
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Re: S...t...e...p
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 18th January 2015 @ 10:34:52 PM AEST
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brilliant and beautifully penned, 'step' is one step up!
hugs n' love nessa |
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