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Silence is a Guest
Contributed by
Invierno
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Sunday, 4th January 2015 @ 05:47:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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When silence decides to drop in for a spell;
the whirring and myriad intrusions-
an assault really, on my peace-
My mind is fine sans the pulsing hum
of humanity-
Oprah, Cops, opinions on this and
that-
surely one moment to swim in my own waters,
to breast the cool to shock then soothe
with no here, no right now;
I can float and the world can spin without me
treading within my treasured void of sound.
Copyright ©
Invierno
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2015-01-04 17:47:19] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Silence is a Guest
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Monday, 5th January 2015 @ 10:01:41 PM AEST (User
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My favorite line is "Surely one moment to swim in my own waters"! Ah..solitude is such a rare gift.
I used to live in the city. When I moved to the suburbs I couldn't sleep because it was too quiet!
Go figure.
The tranquility you speak so eloquently of is growing rare indeed. Hush. Be still. Let us be alone with our thoughts! There is much to be said for meditation, but those who meditate, say very little of it! And we are back to square one!
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Re: Silence is a Guest
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 18th January 2015 @ 10:22:23 PM AEST (User
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beautifully penned... peaceful...
hugs n' love nessa |
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