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Seeking Input
Contributed by
Invierno
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Saturday, 3rd January 2015 @ 04:36:20 PM in AEST
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I'll phrase my query in the form of poem;
moderators...easy friends, I'm holding to the form;
I've an acre of blessed earth, dark as night, rich
as teaming life;
(Don't tell my wife- she doesn't know....yet),
I seek to contribute to greater good and yet
foundering on how.....private patches
less Monsanto?
no more blessed than that could be.
Opinions...interactive. dammit please.
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Re: Seeking Input
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd January 2015 @ 09:07:01 PM AEST
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grew up near an old farm in the suburbs not too far from Detroit. The houses were fairly close to each other, each house had a decent sized backyard, but across the street where the farm house sat they left a big open two street track of land where we played as kids.
Behind the farm house was about an acre, to the left and to the right about four acres between the rows of streets.
The house was purchased by a big time lawyer who had two little girls. The house was big and very nice.
The Lawyer used the acre out back to make a giant pottery and art workshop.
The Lawyer also installed a couple of lights just to the right where each year he would make an ice skating rink where I learned to play hockey.
That family was very nice and although they seemed a lot more educated than most of the people around our small town , they were exceptionally kind.
It was a go to place for learning about art.
And it was all free and very fun.
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Re: Seeking Input
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by JamesStockdale on
Sunday, 4th January 2015 @ 10:32:08 AM AEST
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I know from what you speak! Well done.
MuppetMan
Thanks for sharing that.
We need more stories like yours.
Wealth should not separate us...................... |
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Re: Seeking Input
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by Jigget on
Monday, 5th January 2015 @ 06:06:57 AM AEST
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'no more bless-ed than that could be'....or is it 'no more blessed....'
i prefer 'bless-ed'....
for Bkess-ed has the Rhythm, and it made an excellent line
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