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Broken Up
Contributed by
ladydp2000
on
Monday, 29th December 2014 @ 09:28:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I've always given it all
but I've been just betrayed
my heart is all torn up
and all bruised it lays on the ground.
I've been only loyal and true
but that served me for nothing
in the end I've been betrayed
and stabbed over and over again
But that is the way that it goes
every time that I've given my heart
and I have trusted someone they
they just hurt me and make me cry.
Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2014
December, 30,2014
Copyright ©
ladydp2000
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2014-12-29 21:28:59]
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Re: Broken Up
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by kmec1990 on
Tuesday, 30th December 2014 @ 12:15:05 AM AEST
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An emotional write and I can totally relate and my heart goes out to you. But I have decided that
Being loyal and true does not make you a fool
It makes fools out of those who deceive
For they do see what a treasure indeed
They have til you've left them behind you
Blessings
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Re: Broken Up
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by LauranHyde on
Tuesday, 30th December 2014 @ 01:05:42 AM AEST
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That really sucks, loyalty is always the best. But sadly it gets hurt the most. Goodluck, head up
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Re: Broken Up
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Tuesday, 30th December 2014 @ 07:21:07 PM AEST
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When you are sad, alone, and blue
Remember your partner lost their best,
And their best was you.
Great write,
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Re: Broken Up
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by FireStarter on
Wednesday, 14th January 2015 @ 08:44:44 PM AEST
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| It does not make you weak to be true..he was the one who wronged |
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