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I Can’t Sing
Contributed by
softerware
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Sunday, 28th December 2014 @ 02:19:58 PM in AEST
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There’s music in my mind;
And rhythm in these feet;
For songs of every kind;
I can’t resist the beat.
The lyrics are confusing;
(A desert horse unnamed?)
But like these words I’m choosing;
The music must be framed.
I hum songs in the shower;
I bellow in my car;
Gone are all the flowers;
I pick on my guitar.
I figured I was pretty good;
At baying at the moon;
If only I’d an audience;
I’d be a star by noon!
I joined a choir one summer night;
They put me way in back;
Cause teacher played the black and whites;
And I sang in the cracks.
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Re: I Can’t Sing
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Sunday, 28th December 2014 @ 03:00:41 PM AEST
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This is utterly brilliant, because it speaks to so many people-including me.
Best,
Fox |
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Re: I Can’t Sing
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by Archie on
Monday, 29th December 2014 @ 01:40:42 PM AEST
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Very funny indeed but I like it. I feel this way
"There are songs to make you sad and songs to make you glad, when I have a song to sing life does not seem so bad, so I sing this melody and try to put in words how I feel, tomorrow will be for you and me, I am singing . . ."
Excerpt from 'I'm singing" By Stevie Wonder
You are a very talented poet. |
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Re: I Can’t Sing
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 29th December 2014 @ 10:22:13 PM AEST
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ha! ~so beautifully penned,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: I Can’t Sing
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th December 2014 @ 11:26:14 PM AEST
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| Too funny! |
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Re: I Can’t Sing
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by sanders on
Sunday, 4th January 2015 @ 11:57:00 AM AEST
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This is something new and nice...
the poem has got a musical rhythm in itself :) |
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Re: I Can’t Sing
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by Pogivic on
Friday, 13th March 2015 @ 02:49:41 PM AEST
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| This reminds me of some of my singing experiences. It's both sad and funny. Love your rhyme scheme. Don't stop singing. |
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