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The Dance
Contributed by
softerware
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Sunday, 28th December 2014 @ 02:24:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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He stands here;
She stands there; Unaware. Do they dare?
Turn and look;
Toss the hook; Pride’s forsook.
Face her;
Chase her; Long to embrace her!
Find him;
Bind him; Follow behind him!
Passion and flowers;
Swift are the hours; Passion devours.
Sleep for him;
Weep for him; Dark secrets keep for him.
Why does he stray?
What keeps him away? (What can she say).
Watching the clock;
Silent the knock; Key in the lock.
Nights that he’s late
She lies in wait; Such is her fate
Too late they awaken;
Sad and mistaken;
And all is forsaken.
Exit with grace;
Time will erase;
Loving in hastes; bittersweet taste.
The pain of the yearn;
for love’s swift return’s
A tax love has taken;
To be stirred, not shaken!
Copyright ©
softerware
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2014-12-28 02:24:26]
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Re: The Dance
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th December 2014 @ 04:11:56 AM AEST
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| I feel the anxiety behind the words |
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Re: The Dance
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by Invierno on
Sunday, 28th December 2014 @ 07:01:49 AM AEST
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moody, sad stuff with no redemption at the end. And THAT is how life really is, so well done, I say.
I also like the format; not often to run into a new line schematic.
Good job here,
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Re: The Dance
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by kmec1990 on
Sunday, 28th December 2014 @ 08:23:50 AM AEST
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I love love love this!!! All I can say... Beautiful write!!!
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Re: The Dance
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th December 2014 @ 12:38:26 PM AEST
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| Very very niiiiice. |
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Re: The Dance
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by RussellReinhardt on
Sunday, 28th December 2014 @ 01:41:06 PM AEST
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Hello Soft
Yes sad but true however only if one dwells in the world and I don't say this likely. Yes I know that there are believers that stray as well but. Those who stay focused one God and the word get there. I feel the pain in this poem and hope that its just something random you writing about and not your life's experience. God bless
Greetings
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Re: The Dance
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 29th December 2014 @ 10:14:47 PM AEST
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this is beautiful.... it made me cry....
hugs n' love nessa
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