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Military blues
Contributed by
Devlina
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Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 12:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Years have gone by and there are more to come
No one has touched me more....so sure that your the one
Wait.....there is a voice deep in my head
Filling my thoughts, leaving me lie in bed
Tossing and turning from one thought to another
This choice.....that choice, it's taking me under
Oh, your serious you want to marry me?
Come on now, your just lonely
I'm a recognizable voice over the telephone
If you saw me today you'd probably groan
This all sounds way to good to be true
I'm a realist, a survivor, but not with my head in the blue
I've always thought that I knew what was best for me
I have been wrong twice, I don't know if I should go for three
Because my thought process is so long and hard
A lonely old maid is hopefully not in my cards
There is a flip side to all this madness, I swear
Bad thought are not all I have to bear
There's a fuzzy side like a sun-rippened peach
Sweet, from the heart, a day at the beach
You and I make so much sense
I think it's not just a coincidence
You make me laugh, smile with glee
Wanting to be with you eventually
I wish to see what truths may lie ahead
But a psychic I am not that's why I lie here in bed
Copyright ©
Devlina
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2003-05-26 00:05:00]
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Re: Military blues
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 11:37:50 PM AEST
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Wow, this is beautiful, Brilliantly writen
i hope it all works out alright for you!
- becca |
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Re: Military blues
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by Wrybod on
Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 06:08:09 PM AEST
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Nice crisp poem paints a clear picture of many a youg womans dilema
A couple of my poems "Love Boat" and "He's not the only one" might interest you. Although you seem to have a wise head on your young shoulders
Try to bear in mind love can disappear as quickly as it arrives (particularly in men) what you are looking for is strength of character
will he keep ie promises (vows if you marry)
what sort of a father will he make, can he keep a job, is he trustworthy etc etc
No he doesn't have to be a miracle..... plenty do. |
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Re: Military blues
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by UpsAndDowns on
Tuesday, 16th November 2010 @ 11:23:22 AM AEST
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| I really enjoyed reading this one. I really connect to issues of the heart. I appreciate how hard it is to know what's right sometimes. |
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