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When pain takes over.

Contributed by LauranHyde on Friday, 26th December 2014 @ 06:34:28 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Days go by, minutes pass.
I can't even tell you how much longer I will last.
What's left for me, who am I?
I wish that I, could just let it all be.
I hide away deep inside, so much to say I die inside.
Will everything be okay, if I just lie?

I want to scream, I want to go.
If there were only a place that I could go.
Too and fro, mind confused.
What is right? What is wrong?

The hate I have, have for myself.
I brought it all upon myself.
These eyes you see are filled with fear.
My heart beat dead, it's best to left be.
Love, I don't deserve.
Hope, I gave up long ago.
Can someone please tell me, when my time is to go?

Tears fill my eyes, the though of wanting to die.
I ruin all I touch, I ruin all for that I care.
Forever empty, that I see.
Alone and cold I feel sick inside.
Do I grab the blade, do I do it over again.
The pain in my heart, it shows in my eyes.
Wouldn't it be good, if were gone with just a sigh.

Some may say that I'm ****** up,
But if you were me, you wouldn't wake up.

Tears fall, heart breaks, I am gone, I have no faith.
Nothing more for me to feel.
Now can you come, come take me for the kill.

Copyright © LauranHyde ... [ 2014-12-26 06:34:28]
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Re: When pain takes over. (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 26th December 2014 @ 08:11:15 PM AEST
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very sad but great writing.
Blessings, huggs, prayer,
emy

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