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Grasping The Ethereal
Contributed by
deadreckoning1983
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Monday, 22nd December 2014 @ 05:51:18 AM in AEST
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Chop me up and smoke me down,
Until only the resin remains.
Let me intoxicate you,
A potent pleasure guiltily enjoyed.
Inebriated with toxic love,
I stumble across these plains.
A universe away.
A skytripper,
I travel worlds like a corsair.
Run me through and I don't care,
A ghost ship of memories
Scuttled for good measure.
Clipping the wings of regret,
let them fly into oblivion.
Beyond the atmosphere,
Into the icy void.
Extraterrestrial experiences,
Beyond the vale of this magnetosphere.
Prepare for takeoff you scallywags.
Keep your hands and feet inside the vessel at all times!
Copyright ©
deadreckoning1983
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2014-12-22 05:51:18]
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Re: Grasping The Ethereal
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by Breezy on
Monday, 22nd December 2014 @ 10:24:52 PM AEST
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Well, Dead Recky, you have not lost your touch, but grown so full as a poet!
I adore this, especially the lines about clipping the wings of regret -
Brilliant!!
It's so nice to see you back here and writing up a storm! :)
~ B
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Re: Grasping The Ethereal
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd December 2014 @ 10:33:26 PM AEST
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Clipping the wings of regret,
let them fly into oblivion.
That's a good thing to do. I'm still working on it.
Pretty damn cool poem and you used scallywags, so you get extra points for that! |
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Re: Grasping The Ethereal
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2014 @ 04:26:53 AM AEST
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Are you a gaurdian of the galaxy?
I think you are
lol.... |
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Re: Grasping The Ethereal
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th December 2014 @ 10:06:35 PM AEST
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oh I must bring out ye hallowed bong for thee
With which to smoke visions thy eye
Hath never before seen
Plumes of smoke in a van
After a hard rain
What's that a knock
No officer no my eyes are red
because I was swimming in a very
chlorinated world/ I mean pool
Peace!
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Re: Grasping The Ethereal
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 27th December 2014 @ 04:10:19 PM AEST
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Woah, what a trip... The first half was like; "If Marijuana Could Talk" and the second half I was taken on some mystical trip.
Yowza.
Great stuff. What were we talking about again?
Pass the Doritos, would ya.
~Scorp
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Re: Grasping The Ethereal
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by Invierno on
Sunday, 28th December 2014 @ 07:25:29 AM AEST
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cool stoner poem
Invierno |
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Re: Grasping The Ethereal
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 29th December 2014 @ 09:19:11 PM AEST
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lmao! *starts singing 'memories'* hehe...
hugs n' love nessa
p.s. written to perfection!
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