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Special Effects
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Sunday, 21st December 2014 @ 01:35:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Candlelight awaits;
shadows of him move at me.
Silhouettes deceive.
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
... [
2014-12-21 13:35:18]
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Re: Special Effects
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 21st December 2014 @ 02:07:00 PM AEST
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The first two lines makes me think this is going to turn out very nice but then that last line changes the entire direction.
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Re: Special Effects
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Sunday, 21st December 2014 @ 05:42:13 PM AEST
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As The previous comment says, this is a quintessential yup-nope write. It is great.
Best,
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Re: Special Effects
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 21st December 2014 @ 06:30:40 PM AEST
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| I really liked this, to me it conveys so much imagery and emotion in just a few words. |
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