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Oblivion
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Saturday, 20th December 2014 @ 11:04:14 PM in AEST
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Butterfly flashes
Coal and fire stained glass wings
White moth dies unseen
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2014-12-20 23:04:14]
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Re: Oblivion
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 20th December 2014 @ 11:14:13 PM AEST
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sounds like a word
pictures and alarming graphs
Warnings clear as day
Variation of life is
on its way out
You say it well, In a most salient way!
Peace! |
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Re: Oblivion
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by shelby on
Sunday, 21st December 2014 @ 02:15:25 AM AEST
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I wasnt expecting this one, power in short verse love it
Michelle |
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Re: Oblivion
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Monday, 22nd December 2014 @ 06:01:34 AM AEST
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| Although short(as Haiku's tend to be) tis was profound and a great example of exemplary imagery in such a compact story. Color me impressed girl! |
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Re: Oblivion
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by springchic1979 on
Tuesday, 17th November 2015 @ 08:46:51 PM AEST
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Isn't that just the truth.
Colorful things get noticed because they catch your eye.
Plain things tend to get overlooked.
""Coal and fire stained glass wings""
Excellent description!
I really enjoyed your Haiku. |
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