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A Storm IS Coming
Contributed by
Invierno
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Friday, 19th December 2014 @ 06:52:43 AM in AEST
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“A storm is coming”
whispered the wind,
“Ill tidings soon to visit thee”.
Darkness, thunder claps to flash,
no escape from this iniquity.
No cheek or wisp of hair unbreathed,
as evil wends it way round us,
coming out, the closet gone
sin sitting at the bus's front.
Those with eyes, let them see,
with ears, to hear the evil gong,
calling demons to the party
they've been running all along.
Bloody fields strewn of souls
pile up in Hollywood;
the demon yell is running hard
our spirits good, the tasty food.
But eyes are closed and ears are stopped,
“Squeeze tight! Might it go away?”
The horde you wish disappeared,
aught but stronger every day.
The pitchers' lifted, water sloshed,
the carpenter has hid his tools,
allowing demons backstage pass
to winnow self-indulgent fools.
Copyright ©
Invierno
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Re: A Storm IS Coming
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 19th December 2014 @ 08:01:15 AM AEST
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Even if the wind shouted, I doubt there'd be ears enough to hear. Sin''s been out of the closet, sitting cockily at the front of the bus, for a long time now.
'the carpenter has lost his tools'. i wonder if they were ever fit for purpose?
This has to be one of your best. It oozes quality in so many ways. |
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Re: A Storm IS Coming
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 19th December 2014 @ 09:31:11 AM AEST
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Wow, poet! You are onto some new stuff here. Written with smooth poetic tongue to battle the abrasive nature of evil you speak of. I have re-read this several times now. Very thought provoking write and I love, love the ending.
Fantastic.
~Scorp |
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Re: A Storm IS Coming
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by Archie on
Friday, 19th December 2014 @ 10:14:30 AM AEST
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I like he strong words of his poem. You have a strong faith and belief system.
I have not read your work in a while. You are a very talented poetess, I like your style |
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Re: A Storm IS Coming
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 19th December 2014 @ 03:26:08 PM AEST
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| Yep, definitely a storm is coming. Very well written and provoking of the thought juices. |
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Re: A Storm IS Coming
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by shelby on
Sunday, 21st December 2014 @ 02:46:40 AM AEST
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So happy I am not the only one feeling this storm coming.
Incredible and deep verse, strong, energy flowing well it is perfect.
Michelle |
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Re: A Storm IS Coming
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by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 21st December 2014 @ 06:54:24 AM AEST
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| yes the minions of evil are here already. |
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Re: A Storm IS Coming
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by Davinah on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2014 @ 07:21:45 AM AEST
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I really loved your poem. It captures the sense of impending doom that many of us have brilliantly.
Love,
Davinah |
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Re: A Storm IS Coming
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 29th December 2014 @ 08:06:46 PM AEST
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truly beautifully penned,
hugs n' love nessa |
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