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Hey Stranger
Contributed by
Beyfoxman5
on
Thursday, 18th December 2014 @ 07:10:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Hey stranger, that shadow, it's me
A version of you from around '93
Take a look back, if you feel compelled.
And read me like a book, oh the stories I can tell
Remember what I thought, if you can remember
You were at your best when you didn't know any better
At times you were green, and a bit uncouth
But always thinking up, an optimistic youth
The Stars were the limit with your fresh face
Today failures are burdens, yesterday they were mistakes
I was you and my positivity was relentless
The world was my oyster and the possibilities were limitless
Soon I'll shut the door, soon I'll leave
Just remember this within you I beathe
Copyright ©
Beyfoxman5
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2014-12-18 19:10:17]
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Re: Hey Stranger
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by Invierno on
Friday, 19th December 2014 @ 07:04:00 AM AEST
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I like this alot. Really cool content! I think (forgive me, please) that this poem could use a little polish to achieve a better flow. As said, "A" on content!
My best and thank you for an extraordinary poem.
Invierno |
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Re: Hey Stranger
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 19th December 2014 @ 01:00:14 PM AEST
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| I like the introspective quality of your poem, it hits the nail on the head. 'Age and experience' can often whittle away the eternal optimism of youth. Having a word with that stranger is no bad thing. You've got me doing it, right now. |
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Re: Hey Stranger
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by shelby on
Sunday, 21st December 2014 @ 02:53:20 AM AEST
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I so enjoyed this, I want to pick a favorite part the entire poem start to finish is very good.Thank you for sharing!
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Hey Stranger
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 29th December 2014 @ 08:00:57 PM AEST
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really cool poem, talking to your shadow self- stunning!
hugs n' love nessa |
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