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She Saved Me
Contributed by
Jyssvw22
on
Wednesday, 17th December 2014 @ 12:28:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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In a release of relative tranquility , the bustle of the busy city streets begin to abate and subside.
I close my eyes and allow for nothing but silence.
Darkness dares penetrate a picture of perfect pleasantries.
Soothing sensations when laying her on her back flush against the cold green glassy grass.
Her legs pointed straight towards the ceramic creamy colored ceiling.
Watching the stars flicker as the moon dominates the infinite silenced sliced space.
She squeezes my hand.
I squeeze her hand back.
She smiles and spreads her arms to her sides and swings slowly in a motion of wings flapping fast and flying free.
Floating upwards towards a rejuvenated spirit she is raptured and engulfed in radiant reminders of righteous reasons.
I hold her in the highest regard.
Her singing perks my eardrums up into a solemn stoic submission.
Captivated by my entertainer my undivided eyes focus beyond the gaping gloomy glare gone missing.
Happy now.
In a few moments my meaning will be methodically revealed and realized.
The secrets that are offered are substantiated by the hiss of the sultry sullen serpent.
When I leave this place, I will no longer be the same man.
Changed by a force irrevocably irreversible.
I will leave with harmony in my honorable hands.
With a strength yet unknown.
She lifts my sinking spirit in one swift swoop.
Finally she has found and freed my feeble and fickle heart .
She descends upon me, and asks if I would consider coming along.
And with that, the pain of the past is thankfully and throughly gone.
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2014-12-17 12:28:00]
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Re: She Saved Me
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by BumpyJ on
Wednesday, 17th December 2014 @ 10:13:11 PM AEST
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| This poem gives me hope. |
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Re: She Saved Me
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 19th December 2014 @ 11:23:47 AM AEST
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This is so uplifting in every way! Certainly a little secretive in nature, but who does better layered writes than you?
It is a gift to express yourself so well and yet not reveal it all upon first reading. I feel like I get a clearer picture with each read.
Beautiful jyss. Continue this lovely tale.
~Scorp |
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