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Truth in Art
Contributed by
SylviaHughes
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Tuesday, 16th December 2014 @ 06:38:28 AM in AEST
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Truth in art
Passionate thought
Lady Lazarus’ despair
Once I was still
I can move now
Flawed as I am
Gratitude
I can cope now
Light does not move
Anymore
There is nothing
But greatness
Everything still
A conversational piece
On purity, hatred
The beauty of forever
The movement will cease
The veil that they talk of
it will cover my eyes
There is nothing in everything
There is death in forever
But I can move now
Copyright ©
SylviaHughes
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2014-12-16 06:38:28]
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Re: Truth in Art
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th December 2014 @ 07:52:53 AM AEST
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| A very cryptic and fascinating poem. Judging by your chosen name, it might just be about the suicide of Sylvia Plath. It would certainly fit well with such. |
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Re: Truth in Art
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Tuesday, 16th December 2014 @ 05:31:33 PM AEST
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This poem is outstanding. I especially loved your description of it.
Best,
Fox |
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Re: Truth in Art
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 18th December 2014 @ 03:28:24 PM AEST
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warm welcome to ypdc, your love of plath shows
in this write, i look forward to more from you,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Truth in Art
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by ming on
Tuesday, 23rd February 2016 @ 01:25:38 PM AEST
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"I can move now." Perfect line.
ming |
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Re: Truth in Art
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by alicewhite on
Sunday, 27th October 2019 @ 11:08:08 PM AEST
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Now everything is moving
Here inside I/'/m like metal
Like you
Is what this reminds me of,
Alchemical Gold
Indrid cold
Red hair like heir
Men eat on their ribs
Kings checkmate
Red haired Queen of emerald Isle decrees her position of state as she states
Its great to be good
Even greater to be grateful
To be good coronation stone seen throne stone
Understood
Maybe I should shut up now lol
But you became my muse of inspiration with your words above x |
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