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It is only
Contributed by
drone
on
Tuesday, 16th December 2014 @ 04:05:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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It is only when
a twisted sea of bones
in decaying
concrete jungles
appear
on a Barron horizon
glowing green
unatrural in the dark
do you see
Copyright ©
drone
... [
2014-12-16 04:05:27] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: It is only
(User Rating: 1 ) by SylviaHughes on
Tuesday, 16th December 2014 @ 06:50:49 AM AEST (User
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You were able to create a strong feeling with little words. Don't know exactly what it is but there's something about this poem that made me read it over and over. |
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Re: It is only
(User Rating: 1 ) by Beyfoxman5 on
Tuesday, 16th December 2014 @ 05:35:53 PM AEST (User
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I certainly second the previous comment. What you write is completely magnetic.
Best,
Fox |
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