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Superpower From Poison
Contributed by
Blackheart
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Thursday, 11th December 2014 @ 08:13:46 PM in AEST
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Haiku
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I keep the devil
In my frustration and God
In my heart and soul
Take all my anger
Out on only myself and
Let no one else know
My envy towards
Them and how I wish so bad
For power they hold
And after 2 years
Of putting envy in practice
Such power my own.
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Blackheart
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2014-12-11 20:13:46]
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Re: Superpower From Poison
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by kmec1990 on
Friday, 12th December 2014 @ 11:55:32 AM AEST
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Good for you, I also wish for that power, however I am still a work in practice. Excellent write.
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Re: Superpower From Poison
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th December 2014 @ 02:43:30 AM AEST
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a poem is an antidote from the super power of poison
envy the practice of free thought
through to the last breath you take
the final exodus
scene 27 the spreading of jello
in bowl
or empathy
love an oasis from infatuation
paradise found
Peace!
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Re: Superpower From Poison
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 18th December 2014 @ 10:59:42 AM AEST
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this is great how you learned this, bravo!
hugs n' love nessa
p.s. it is all perfect haiku with one exception- forth
stanza second line- 'of' does not belong there:) |
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