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Buoy
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Thursday, 11th December 2014 @ 03:56:27 PM in AEST
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Cantankerous-
Stumpy. Lumpy.
Jumpy.
Dive headfirst,
Or heart,
Whatever feels worse.
Enter the berserk
Notion that I'd ensnare,
Someone. Somewhere.
Look at the price already-
I am not worth it, really.
Thoughts gnash, consumed unsteady,
In real time it'd be silly.
You remain out of my league-
I know my role, know my place,
An anonymous blank face,
Basking in lukewarm intrigue.
My grieved paper burned a trail-
Straight to your wayward bread crumbs,
Intoxicating. Inhale,
Entrails spilling to succumb.
One day I'll die.
Disappear and you won't know why,
Are you that guy?
Leave me to rot, or watch me fry,
Sizzled by perpetual lies.
Shaped, then molded-
Often scolded, now scalded,
By your blistering resolve
Yesterday, today, and tomorrow-
Should have folded.
I'm thick-headed, yet balded.
Blinded by your love absolve,
Of my crimes, kiss my sorrow,
Goodbye. Weighty. Hold it.
Or hold me-
Just don't let me go,
Keep me free,
From sinking too low.
Copyright ©
hauntedscorp
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Re: Buoy
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by Tiny_Tina on
Thursday, 11th December 2014 @ 10:36:32 PM AEST
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i hope that everyone has a soulmate. maybe yours hasnt come along yet. just wait and see. i liked this.
Tks for commenting on my haiku.
TT |
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Re: Buoy
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Thursday, 11th December 2014 @ 11:28:47 PM AEST
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| Really great emotive write here Scorp. I was a little lost at first and then it all started coming together. everything you do is marvelous. I love reading new poems from you, it is like Christmas |
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Re: Buoy
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by kmec1990 on
Friday, 12th December 2014 @ 03:21:50 AM AEST
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Cantankerous-
"Stumpy. Lumpy.
Jumpy.
Dive headfirst,
Or heart,
Whatever feels worse.
Enter the berserk"
Sounds like you had my day...
Emotional write, love the flow
K |
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Re: Buoy
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th December 2014 @ 01:18:14 AM AEST
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| This is such a powerful write, yet, paradoxically, so very, very vulnerable. I absolutely adore the passion and giving of the inner soul that this wonderful poem delivers. |
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Re: Buoy
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 18th December 2014 @ 10:52:12 AM AEST
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love will drive one mad lol! i really don't like the part where you
are 'scolded' then 'scalded' that second is not loving on his part,
tho then again kahlil does point out love is also for our pruning....
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Buoy
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th December 2014 @ 02:52:06 PM AEST
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Enter the berserk
Notion that I'd ensnare,
Someone. Somewhere.
Not berserk at all!!!!
This poem makes me think of the roller coaster love ride. Sometimes I'm glad I'se gots no one.
Nice one!!! |
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Re: Buoy
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Friday, 19th December 2014 @ 05:11:48 PM AEST
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If I told you that I just like the "enter the berserk" line, I'd be lying. I will be reading this poem again.
Best,
Fox |
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Re: Buoy
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by Breezy on
Monday, 22nd December 2014 @ 09:35:42 PM AEST
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Well, I commented once, but of course the site became cantankerous and the comment disappeared.
(Hopefully my comment will not appear thrice for my efforts :P)
I SO relate to this. Honestly, reading this was as reflective as looking in the bathroom mirror. (how DO you do that?)
We love to hold on don't we? I often wonder if the drowning would bring about a better end...?
Meh, don't listen to me. A hopeless romantic is never practical. ;)
I am loving reading you again !
~ B
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