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Taste Test
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Monday, 8th December 2014 @ 12:59:54 PM in AEST
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It's obvious.
How you feel,
No big reveal,
Nor ominous.
At times, impracticable,
Growing fidgety with lust
Taste your nakedness, I must-
Render inoperable,
Collide, once more
Ride, slide, in stride,
King of my pride-
Toppled, on floor
Bodies feast promiscuous.
Indulging our wickedness,
The impact makes me cry out,
Your name, repeated, I shout-
From top of lungs,
Orgasm sprung,
You were devoured.
I'm empowered-
Something so fine,
Stitches, in time,
United rhyme,
Of yours and mine.
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2014-12-08 12:59:54]
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Re: Taste Test
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 8th December 2014 @ 02:21:04 PM AEST
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winter has become warmer! lol! ...i especially love that last stanza::
Something so fine,
Stitches, in time,
United rhyme,
Of yours and mine.
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Taste Test
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by RussellReinhardt on
Monday, 8th December 2014 @ 02:37:37 PM AEST
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Cool piece
Greetings
Rus |
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Re: Taste Test
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 8th December 2014 @ 07:18:48 PM AEST
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 And all these years I thought orgasms came from some other place!!!!
Anywaaaays, obvious is the best place to be. No games, nothing to interpret, out in the open, well except that! Get a room, will ya'?
What's in store next from the Scorperrific to be share with us mere humans? |
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Re: Taste Test
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 8th December 2014 @ 07:20:11 PM AEST
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| P.S. this here fidgety word is another one of my favorites. |
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Re: Taste Test
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by jyssvw22 on
Thursday, 11th December 2014 @ 01:37:11 PM AEST
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Wow. Lots to take in . Sounds like you have come to a resolve . You sound strong here . You sound like you are ready to fight , love , and do whatever needs to be done . That tenacity will see you through . It's a good style for you . Anger can be positive if channeled correctly . Controlled aggressiveness too.
As always , I am left impressed . |
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