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~What I thought I knew~
Contributed by
shelby
on
Monday, 8th December 2014 @ 12:14:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The clouds are trying to smother the moon tonight,
dim her bright light glow.
She keeps brushing them away,
to shine even brighter
behind branches of the grand pine tree.
It reminds me of things
what I thought I knew
at times the realness
tries to cover things over
like the clouds and the moon
reality and fantasy mix together
in life the greatest tricksters.
I feel the realness,
it bites at my soul
as the cold winters night
blows frosty breath across my face.
Transfixed, I stare at the moon
it fights to shine against the black sky
beneath the thickening clouds
that threaten a beating rain.
Now I know and I dont know in real terms
of what I thought I knew.
Copyright ©
shelby
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2014-12-08 00:14:34]
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Re: ~What I thought I knew~
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by jyssvw22 on
Monday, 8th December 2014 @ 10:17:43 AM AEST
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| Very nice work with this one . Vivid and a mood setter. I enjoyed reading it . |
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Re: ~What I thought I knew~
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 8th December 2014 @ 02:15:30 PM AEST
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cool picture! beautifully penned!
woofies, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: ~What I thought I knew~
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Monday, 8th December 2014 @ 04:34:28 PM AEST
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If we just stood outside for a minute....and if we could write like that. Awesome. I'm drawn to it.
Best,
Fox |
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Re: ~What I thought I knew~
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 8th December 2014 @ 04:55:39 PM AEST
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Wow, what a way to wrap it up. Well done Michelle.
The imagery is overflowing, and I am spellbound!
~Scorp |
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Re: ~What I thought I knew~
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by RussellReinhardt on
Tuesday, 9th December 2014 @ 12:31:44 AM AEST
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Hi Michelle
How are you doing? Haven't spoken in a while. This piece is very beautiful. For me is see in short. Yes the truth will set one free and good will always prevail. Great write God bless
Greetings
Rus |
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Re: ~What I thought I knew~
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th December 2014 @ 01:38:09 AM AEST
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That last line confused me a bit maybe because it's late but overall, love this poem. What an excellent write.
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