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making love
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Friday, 5th December 2014 @ 03:05:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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i did it on a snowman in the park
until he fell over and it got dark
i did on the edge of a deep cliff
got up- looked down- and sniffed
did it upside down or backwards
sideways, sundays, days or nights
no- it did not matter where i was
so went to store for toys- 'cause
there were some almost disasters
just me- getting what i was after
and did it during a thunderstorm
made jean knees dirty and worn
those were some crazy wild days
making love happen all around
but i do not ever do it anymore-
watching blown bubbles fall to
the floor!
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Re: making love
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by Invierno on
Friday, 5th December 2014 @ 05:25:41 PM AEST
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O.W. one of my fav's. What a brilliant wit! A somewhat apropos quote from Ocscar, "Youth is wasted on the young".
Wonderful poem, my friend. Yes...the things we did when young...Sometimes I can't envision the escapades of my youth with the man I am now. I will say it's a damn miracle I'm still alive.
A healthy regard for making the 'beast with two backs' .....I love it!
Best,
Invierno |
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Re: making love
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th December 2014 @ 07:53:59 PM AEST
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I believe you may have scarred that snowman for life!!! Thankfully their life isn't very long.
I want to go buy some bubbles to blow around now. Thank you.
Pssst...little secret, I have a slinky (a metal one) and this thingy that makes all kinds of colors when you press a button. Don't tell anyone, please.
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Re: making love
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Friday, 5th December 2014 @ 10:21:37 PM AEST
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Close your eyes and push rewind. A thing of beauty.
Best,
Fox |
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Re: making love
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Friday, 5th December 2014 @ 11:33:54 PM AEST
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| Well I feel very sheepish now, lol. very cute! |
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Re: making love
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 6th December 2014 @ 05:56:35 AM AEST
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| Super, duper trooper! What great fun. The cold is one thing, but steep cliffs are another! lol |
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Re: making love
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 6th December 2014 @ 03:46:34 PM AEST
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Your writes are always so much fun when you're at your cheeky best. You had me paying attention and smirking through and through. From your author's note, to final line-
Great job.
~Scorp |
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Re: making love
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by kmec1990 on
Sunday, 7th December 2014 @ 10:39:41 AM AEST
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You are right about wasted on youth if I knew then what I know now. A snowman I am in awe. Great write
K |
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Re: making love
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by shelby on
Sunday, 7th December 2014 @ 11:28:14 PM AEST
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I am smiling:) Nessa this was super.You rock!
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: making love
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by RussellReinhardt on
Monday, 8th December 2014 @ 02:29:28 PM AEST
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Hello Nessa
All I want to say is memory lain was looooooong tonight LoL
Greetings
Rus
PS: Great write |
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Re: making love
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by Pogivic on
Friday, 13th March 2015 @ 03:17:36 PM AEST
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| You have a natural talent in telling a simple story and making it so interesting to read. Thank You! |
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