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Same Time Next Week
Contributed by
kmec1990
on
Friday, 5th December 2014 @ 12:20:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Caught up in a firefight,
drama of their former life.
Here she comes broom in hand,
grow a pair, take a stand.
Spitting, hissing, screeching blight,
hackles up prepared to smite.
Bubonic bullets light the fuse,
children staring quite confused.
Closet dwellers spilling out,
nothing's sacred hear the shout;
Of dirty deeds and love forsaken,
innocence has now been taken.
Damage done cannot rewind,
children crying, so purblind.
Nothing gained still not defeated,
'cause next week they'll just repeat it.
Copyright ©
kmec1990
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2014-12-05 00:20:26]
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Re: Same Time Next Week
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 5th December 2014 @ 12:51:49 AM AEST
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i've seen couples go at it for years... very sad for the
kids, your poem just blazes daggers, it's right on- an
excellent vividly image filled write,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Same Time Next Week
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th December 2014 @ 09:34:08 PM AEST
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I unfortunately relate all too well to this. Glad those days for me are over...for years now.
You conveyed that meaning very well in this. Great job!
Thanks,
Tim |
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Re: Same Time Next Week
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Saturday, 6th December 2014 @ 12:44:09 AM AEST
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| very very good, reminds me of hauntedscorps poetry. same kind of flow and thought processes. thanks for sharing |
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