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BARTALK
Contributed by
softerware
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Wednesday, 3rd December 2014 @ 10:27:34 PM in AEST
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What’s your sign he says; come here often?
You a sports fan? Me neither.
What do you think of this place?
Like the decorations;
You ready for Christmas?
Yeah, I work too. But ya hafta do Christmas.
You got kids?
No kidding. You don’t look old enough!
Seriously, how old are you?
I don’t believe it.
But I’ll drink to that…bring us a round over here!
Me and my old lady had 3 kids. All boys!
Course they’re all grown now.
Nah, they don’t live around here.
You got grandkids? Me neither.
We’re probably better off! (laughs)
Man, the cost of college today will kill ya!
I never went to college. You did?
Man, you must have been rich!
I’m just a working stiff. See these hands?
You can tell, right?
Oh, this must be your fella.
Hi man, just shooting the breeze..here, have my seat.
I’ll sit down here…no, no problem!
Hey, barkeep, another beer here.
I couldn't help noticing that you like the ball game..You come here often? Yeah, me too.
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Re: BARTALK
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2014 @ 11:09:29 PM AEST
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How did you know I did that?  Were you stalking me? Where's the bug? In my ear??!!??  No wonder there's always a ringing in it.
Except you left out the part where the guy punched me.
Okay, serious now. I like the way this progressed (seemed) into a span of a life time and then came back to square one.
Thanks. It was enjoyable dear poetess. |
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Re: BARTALK
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 4th December 2014 @ 12:32:22 PM AEST
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ha! i don't know if you meant it as funny but i'm laughing
and giggling over here! this is sooo true of the bar life! i
love how he moves down the bar when her fella comes-
then starts his bit all over again, so beautifully penned, i
saw it all play out in my mind,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: BARTALK
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by RussellReinhardt on
Thursday, 4th December 2014 @ 04:19:03 PM AEST
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Hi there Soft
No in depth comment this time round. Just wanna say great to read you again. This reminded me of why I steer clear of bars. Great write. God bless
Greetings
Rus |
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Re: BARTALK
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by Invierno on
Friday, 5th December 2014 @ 07:04:15 AM AEST
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One word- "perfect".
Invierno |
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Re: BARTALK
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 7th December 2014 @ 12:24:14 PM AEST
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Talk is cheap, well said. Especially when diluted by a sleazy drunk.
I'll stick to coffee. Thanks for posting.
~Scorp |
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Re: BARTALK
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by Pogivic on
Tuesday, 7th April 2015 @ 08:23:18 PM AEST
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| Love this one, it brings back memories of the small talk I was part of in my old beer drinking days. Now I often say thank God I done my heavy drinking when I was young. A hangover would be too much for me to handle now. Still it sounds so familiar just listening some drunk trying to carry on a constructive conversation. Cleverly written. |
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