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Just Because
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Wednesday, 3rd December 2014 @ 09:24:43 AM in AEST
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Wasted years,
Tasted tears
It's the fear that steers
This ship or boat-
Stuck somewhere remote,
Throw anchor overboard
Swim to the shore-
For the tired and poor,
And find greener grasses
Among the huddled masses,
Would you be there to greet-
With open arms,
Our bodies conjoined, explosive heat,
Your kiss disarms.
I am where I belong-
Here, or there,
We can't go wrong
My life I want to share-
With you.
Because;
I love you too.
Copyright ©
hauntedscorp
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2014-12-03 09:24:43]
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Re: Just Because
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2014 @ 01:43:41 PM AEST
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From here and to the grave,
Stand tall and ride the wave.
Love can drive us crazy. I enjoyed this.
Best,
Fox |
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Re: Just Because
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2014 @ 06:59:09 PM AEST
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Nothing like a straight forward love poem that rocks! Don't let me forget to pinch you next time I see you. *inserts come here you emote*.
Did I mention this poem rocks? I thought you said you couldn't write any more. Pfffft, liar liar pants on fire....for more than one reason right? Muwahahahaha!
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Re: Just Because
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by Loende on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2014 @ 08:07:47 PM AEST
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Oh, they are never truly wasted years, now are they?
It was a slick and sexy write, sister!
Luff,
~d |
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Re: Just Because
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by RussellReinhardt on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2014 @ 08:50:02 PM AEST
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Great write for one who has lost there words lol. Just kidding. I enjoyed this one very much.
Greetings
Rus |
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Re: Just Because
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 4th December 2014 @ 12:44:01 PM AEST
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aww! just lovely! so lovely, sooo sweet and beautifully
penned, you deserve all that love and happiness and
more!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Just Because
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Thursday, 4th December 2014 @ 11:24:17 PM AEST
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This ship or boat-
Made me think of Jack Sparrow and then I had to laugh
Well I am glad one of us here found love to share with someone. Gah! I thought it was gonna be me, lol
Great write, very soft and flowing. I really enjoyed the imagery |
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Re: Just Because
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by kmec1990 on
Friday, 5th December 2014 @ 12:27:21 AM AEST
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I really love
Wasted years,
Tasted tears
It's the fear that steers
This ship or boat-
To this I can relate, excellent write.
If this is autobiographical, I'm happy for you, if not keep trying it's out there :)
Blessings,
K |
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Re: Just Because
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by alicewhite on
Thursday, 30th July 2015 @ 07:47:21 PM AEST
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| pinch punch first day of the right month, white rabbit white rabbit white rabbit .reminds me of easter, your poetry to me seems to be best explained as exceptional art in the realm of spooky action at a distance in which information is sent faster than the speed of light ,fractal space time singularity signate synchronicity, red queen time goes in every direction. going to read every word you wrote wright and words yet to be written ,those are the words worth writing after reading.i know i sound crazy but basically i think your talent is awesome n crzy good x |
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