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Our Future Is Weak
Contributed by
waynster
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Wednesday, 3rd December 2014 @ 02:20:03 AM in AEST
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Stepping back into the future
the past is full of tears
So much sadness
because of how much has changed over the years
Confused
about where my mind needs to be
It travels through time
trying to understand everything that should mean something to me
The past, the present, and the future
they all play a role in this life we live
What we all see in our travels
offers us a unique message to give
Our future is weak
if we only allow it to be
Without learning lessons from our past
and opening our minds to truly see
I step back into the future
bringing knowledge from the past
Trying to send a message
to a society that is so vast
It was our past
it is our present and will be our future, you see
We have to be willing to stand together
if we want our country to remain free
Whatever your race or your color
love your neighbor as a friend
We all need to think of future generations
to you all, this message I send
Take a few moments
think about how life could really be
If we stopped all the hatred
to build a prosperous future for our children to see
Written by: E. Wayne Searles
03 December 2014
Copyright © 2014 E.Wayne Searles All Rights Reserved
http://www.poeticquest-1.biglaunch.net
Soul-of-a-poet@hotmail.com
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waynster
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2014-12-03 02:20:03]
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Re: Our Future Is Weak
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by Invierno on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2014 @ 07:24:19 AM AEST
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I like your attitude and your poem. Well done.
Invierno |
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Re: Our Future Is Weak
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2014 @ 01:50:45 PM AEST
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Stealing a line from the band Pearl jam,
It make much more sense,
To live in the present tense
But I can not find it in myself to stay in the present either. Man.
I enjoyed this,
Best,
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Re: Our Future Is Weak
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 4th December 2014 @ 04:26:05 PM AEST
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true and absolutely beautifully penned, blessings,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Our Future Is Weak
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by Archie on
Thursday, 4th December 2014 @ 04:42:50 PM AEST
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| I really like this. It reminds me of a poem a wrote last year called "There is no Unity" I have not posted it on the site because its view is from a negative perspective. Your poem is from a positive one and that is very hopeful for us guys who like to think. |
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Re: Our Future Is Weak
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by kmec1990 on
Thursday, 4th December 2014 @ 08:56:08 PM AEST
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Excellent write, you are exactly right, it isn't about color it's about people and their right to be who they are, where they are. I really loved this.
K |
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Re: Our Future Is Weak
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by desire on
Tuesday, 9th December 2014 @ 10:20:58 AM AEST
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| I loved every bit of it....and its so true....thanks for sharing |
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