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All In
Contributed by
Jyssvw22
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Tuesday, 2nd December 2014 @ 12:23:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Somewhere along the line it all unraveled.
Before our very eyes we became entangled.
In the midst of a storm, we did ferocious battle.
A fight to the finish, we exited victorious, our mark now indelible.
As the past recedes, into the night we venture with anticipation.
As our lives proceed, we strike down past indignation.
For when the heart bleeds, love presents with an unbridled invitation.
I accept you, as you have accepted me, without undue hesitation.
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Jyssvw22
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2014-12-02 12:23:38]
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Re: All In
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by dvtpdw on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2014 @ 05:20:25 PM AEST
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| I like this write - it carries many meanings and leaves it open to one's mind to interpret. Very intense and well written write - It spoke to me, P |
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Re: All In
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2014 @ 08:23:02 PM AEST
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Love it, because it rings true. I like the injection of wit, too. Gave me a laugh. Thank you. Beautiful landscaping, by the way. Perfect ending.
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Re: All In
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by TheDreamer on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2014 @ 01:10:04 AM AEST
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| This poem is beautifully crafted. Well done. This is wonderful |
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Re: All In
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2014 @ 01:55:09 AM AEST
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I really wanted to pick a perfect little part of it but I cannot.Start to finish it flows and carries itself into a beautiful master of a poem, NICE.I appreciate your talent.
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Michelle |
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