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WORK TO DO
Contributed by
RobD33
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Monday, 1st December 2014 @ 10:10:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I longed to leave my mother’s womb
Months before my birth
The place felt like an Egyptian tomb
Robbed of all its worth
Even before her waters broke
I practised every day
The front crawl and the butterfly stroke
I was impatient that way
For I knew right from the beginning
That I had work to do
And that life would have no meaning
Till I started my search for you.
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RobD33
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2014-12-01 10:10:18]
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Re: WORK TO DO
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st December 2014 @ 12:54:50 PM AEST
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I really like the perspective this was written from. Great work. Brought a smile to my face!
Thank you for an enjoyable read and  to YPDC.
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Re: WORK TO DO
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Monday, 1st December 2014 @ 04:58:36 PM AEST
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Talk about initiative. This is it. Great write.
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