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A reversed mind
Contributed by
dagger-of-the-mind
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Sunday, 30th November 2014 @ 04:13:16 PM in AEST
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Oh no it better not be me. Not that, leave me alone. I'm not out here because of you.
What makes me think I can have the sun in my eyes in my face? You can stay here
And I,ll stay out of you mind. Just out of sight. So you can see. Maby you will se my face, and I will see you.
Its a revese action that I might call you mine.
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Re: A reversed mind
(User Rating: 1 ) by dvtpdw on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2014 @ 05:24:15 PM AEST (User
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Your words give a ponder to the reader; it takes you down several different paths. I read it twice and took a diverse road each read. Nice, nice write, P |
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