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Unborn
Contributed by
drone
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Sunday, 30th November 2014 @ 02:54:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Will there be
a tomorrow
when the the day is done
for the ones yet to breath
tomorrow
may only be
nothing
but a flickering dream
within a hart
that has yet to beat
Copyright ©
drone
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2014-11-30 02:54:55]
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Re: Unborn
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by Spike on
Sunday, 30th November 2014 @ 05:47:29 AM AEST
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| nicely structured and thoughtful. Check spelling, though. Spike |
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Re: Unborn
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Sunday, 30th November 2014 @ 11:21:04 AM AEST
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Anything can happen at any time. You hit the nail on the head.
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