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Losing you
Contributed by
sideshowrunaway
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Friday, 23rd May 2003 @ 01:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I don't like to admit it
But I'm getting scared
Two weeks feels like two years
When living's been impaired
I can't help but imagine
Just what it would be like
If only this once
Things turned out right
And maybe I wouldn't cry so hard
If I'd heard your voice
Maybe breathing wouldn't hurt so bad
If I'd had a choice
It's too late to cry now
There's nothing left to cry for
Doesn't do me no good anyhow
Can't even read your letters anymore
What am I supposed to say
Play along
Pretend that I'm okay
I'd rather not, if it's alright with you
At some point, playing got too hard
Close my eyes, and I lose
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2003-05-23 13:35:00]
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Re: Losing you
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 06:22:01 AM AEST
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Oh my gosh... this is so very beautifully written! Tragically sad but touching. You made an amazing poem out of a hurtful situation. I can relate to this, and I just hope you find it in yourself to move on. Blessed be,
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Losing you
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by faffeee on
Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 09:59:18 AM AEST
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| very good poem. i hope, as moonlit said, u find the strength to walk away...in the end you'll only be hurt more if u don't, however much that seems impossible and untrue. good luck xxx |
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