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Nuclear
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
on
Saturday, 29th November 2014 @ 03:37:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Wishing I still held the answers you once gave-
I am, unchanged. Still curious as ever,
Mulling over every retold endeavour
Obsessively, and with wanton lust, I crave-
Sharp tongue, busy fingers, mind, or pouty lips.
Of that Yank. Never to forget, he encrypts,
Delicious. Of this I am almost certain-
Falling in stride in that place that doesn't sleep
I could have sexy you, and your words, to keep
Larcenous. Was your removal of my heart-
Being cared for lovingly, fondled, and stroked
Pumping with fervour at this love you awoke.
Copyright ©
hauntedscorp
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2014-11-29 15:37:14]
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Re: Nuclear
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 29th November 2014 @ 07:39:37 PM AEST
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oooo! i just love this one! might it be love then? somebody
sure has captured your fancy! this is just exquisitly delightful!
hugs n' love nessa
@->>->>- |
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Re: Nuclear
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 29th November 2014 @ 09:33:52 PM AEST
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 Holy *****, that's hot! Wow. |
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Re: Nuclear
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Sunday, 30th November 2014 @ 05:48:39 AM AEST
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| What a great ending stanza!!! I loved every line here, everything was perfectly placed and worded. Seems we are all looking for love....hmmm. |
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Re: Nuclear
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by Tiny_Tina on
Monday, 1st December 2014 @ 01:47:33 AM AEST
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Imaginative!!!
TT |
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Re: Nuclear
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by Breezy on
Monday, 1st December 2014 @ 09:57:50 PM AEST
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DAMN!!
(I'll be back with a more coherent thought)
but for now ... just ..... damn, girl!
~ B
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Re: Nuclear
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by Loende on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2014 @ 02:51:56 AM AEST
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Goodness gracious! That's a heckuva
sweet and sexy little poem there, Scorp!
Nicely penned, sweet friend.
~luff, d |
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Re: Nuclear
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by jyssvw22 on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2014 @ 12:34:22 PM AEST
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| Definitely a different style for you . I envy the way you continuously reinvent yourself and challenge the mundane . The topic and title are powerful in a physical way , one can almost feel the explosion. As usual , you lead the talent pack on this site . It is an honor to comment on your poems . |
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