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Cut
Contributed by
faffeee
on
Friday, 23rd May 2003 @ 12:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Cut.
Just a cut.
The moment freezes.
We are solitary as the world spins around us
Colours merge into one
Fear gushes inside of me
Panic spreads as I feel it forcing upwards
I can’t move from your electric gaze
Accusations spit from your wretched eyes like bullets
You search my face for an explanation
- I attempt a smile, and the tension crackles away.
Relief floods through me
But such a fleeting moment
Will always hang in time,
Leaving a gap stretching far into the distance,
And a truth neither of us will voice
But both of us will always remember.
I hear myself repeat the words I uttered
Seemingly once in another, far-away lifetime -
Cut.
Just a cut.
But my voice cracks and fades
And you are staring out of the window.
A vague movement and you finally drop my arm
Like a lead weight too heavy to carry.
I automatically rub the spot you clutched
Laughing slightly hysterically as I notice how ironic it is
That your fingers made an angrier mark
Than the cut.
Just a cut.
Copyright ©
faffeee
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2003-05-23 00:35:00]
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Re: Cut
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by me on
Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 02:07:49 AM AEST
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| i like this... well written |
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Re: Cut
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 11:10:10 PM AEST
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Yeh, i like this, its great, it is very well written, keep up the good work
- Becca |
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