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Chemical Reaction
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Thursday, 27th November 2014 @ 12:09:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Well. You wanted results.
Scanned over your report
Sorry that I was forced to resort,
Checking for a pulse. Are we reborn?
It's all your fault. Or mine.
My Heart beats for resuscitation
By your sniped rapid-fire
This could turn into Porky's Revenge,
I'll keep it, rated R,
I mean PG. On all fours. Raspy.
Crawling, for our rapport
Satiated. By further release-
Of desired pen; rare bird,
Of a bold feather; rabble-rouser
The moon to his rocket
My tongue dances in your radiance-
Radiant heat. Rampant.
Combustible rapture
Hypnotize your lengthy rattlesnake
Crash and recede into your rubble
Rummage. Through the remains.
Ravenous, for your touch now, and then
You make me rambunctious,
Torched. By your chemical reaction.
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2014-11-27 12:09:18]
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Re: Chemical Reaction
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by Lionel on
Thursday, 27th November 2014 @ 06:07:33 PM AEST
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| Wow, I search poetry a long time to find someone as good as you. |
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Re: Chemical Reaction
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by softerware on
Thursday, 27th November 2014 @ 08:58:35 PM AEST
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This reminds me of spinning around with the treetops and the sky swirling images overhead.
I can't make sense of it; but its beautiful and delirious!
softerware |
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Re: Chemical Reaction
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th November 2014 @ 01:03:56 AM AEST
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This reminds me of how I think....all over the place in chaotic patterns completely making sense to myself but possibly driving the sane person insane if they were inside my brain listening. Probably why I like it.
Bravo and it even made some sense to me!!! Fear not, my Scorpendous One. I don't have to be following everything to like it.
Hoo yeah! Bring on the Scorpness! |
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Re: Chemical Reaction
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Friday, 28th November 2014 @ 11:11:55 PM AEST
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My God is there no end to your abilities and ability to communicate naughty things in a classy way.
Hypnotize your lengthy rattlesnake....
What great innuendo. Great ending line too. what a writer!!! |
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Re: Chemical Reaction
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 29th November 2014 @ 11:26:49 AM AEST
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only you could write something like this and have it be sexy and classy!
hugs n' love nessa |
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